Reviewer : Melissa March Student: Geoff Hendricks Date : October 5, 2005 Assignment : Section 2 PR #4
Information flow is mostly coherent from paragraph to paragraph. The section includes material that is completely relevant to the overall idea that is covered. Between the second and third paragraph, you may want to add a footer that ties the information that each paragraph contains so that they conceptually transition. The second paragraph alludes to what the third is going to cover, however does not have a tangible tie such as a footer. Psychology is being covered more, with references to Freud to support and build legitimate claims. Overall the section is articulated well and the point concerning psychological suppression of memories and their "veiled" resurfacing is well made.
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Reviewer : Melissa March
Student: Geoff Hendricks
Date : October 5, 2005
Assignment : Section 2
PR #4
Information flow is mostly coherent from paragraph to paragraph. The section includes material that is completely relevant to the overall idea that is covered. Between the second and third paragraph, you may want to add a footer that ties the information that each paragraph contains so that they conceptually transition. The second paragraph alludes to what the third is going to cover, however does not have a tangible tie such as a footer. Psychology is being covered more, with references to Freud to support and build legitimate claims. Overall the section is articulated well and the point concerning psychological suppression of memories and their "veiled" resurfacing is well made.
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